英语作文评语 40句菁华

1、You are an excellent boy. I appreciate what you have done in your handwriting and believe you will be successful on your study.

2、You are a clever girl. I appreciate your handwriting so much. Wish you make more improvement on your study.

3、If Xu juanxiu handwriting, clear and tidy structure, can not help but give people a feeling of fresh and refreshing, this point the teacher really should learn from you. Let us promote each other in the future Chinese learning, ok?

4、The beginning of the article is simple and appropriate. It is artistic to set off the mood of the characters through the description of the environment.

5、Close with an implicit theme

6、It ended a little too abruptly

7、from the scene to the end of the natural

8、The ending seems to be unfinished, and the beginning should be observed and described vividly

9、Start with feeling and end with feeling, which makes the article coherent before and after and at the same time makes the theme of the article repeat again and again and has a strong appeal

10、The article's opinion on... To the point of the article... The delicate and vivid portrayal of the lofty concept is admirable

11、The article's language is fresh and lively, and the description can capture the main features of things. The short and concise length is worth reading

12、The content is close to modern life, novel and unique, grasping the pulse of The Times, and doing the atmosphere of The Times.

13、The narrative is detailed and specific, the details are vivid and lifelike, the personalities of the characters are bright and prominent, and the images are plump and vivid.

14、The description of the environment is objective and true. The environment serves the character's character and better explains the ins and outs of the formation of character's character.

15、Poor planning and lack of clear priorities.

16、The focus is prominent, the center is clear, and the idea is clear.

17、Clear views, clear likes and dislikes, make people at a glance.

18、Although there is a central theme, the expression is not sufficient and powerful, the words are not real, empty and weak.

19、The subject is not serious enough, and there are dross in the thought.

20、Brief explanation of time, place and result...

21、The language is concise, standard, and the opening sentence is attractive.

22、The beginning of the scene is quite new; Flashback the beginning, rendering the mood.

23、... A brief description of the highlights; provide

24、Briefly describe the antecedents and pave the way.

25、Anthropomorphic language makes the article more lively.

26、The transition is natural and each paragraph is clearly explained.

27、This part refers to the examples in the text, the language is too flat, can be modified to make the language more vivid.

28、For... "Is a good metaphor.

29、The two main features of this article are to be detailed and concise, and to be born of the virtual and the real. The content is richer and more vivid.

30、The article is novel in content, reasonable in structure, smooth and coherent in nature.

31、Rich examples, appropriate material selection, detailed and slightly appropriate description, more convincing.

32、The language is lively and humorous, making people laugh.

33、The language is too brief, as if written in outline, but fails to outline,

34、Articles that are complex but not messy can be detailed, concise and focused.

35、Skillfully use anthropomorphic techniques to make the objects in the article have the characteristics of human behavior and human thoughts and emotions, so that it can reflect the spiritual process of the protagonist in the article from the side.

36、The selection of material is bland, too old, vulgar, simple and naive, not new, and difficult to profoundly reflect the authenticity of life in times.

37、Be able to choose subjects with typical meanings in life and have strong representativeness of events.

38、The language of the article is easy to understand and close to the reality of life, which makes reading feel intimate. ... In a relaxed and happy tone, he spoke to us with an endless aftertaste.

39、Clear thinking, correct punctuation, complete structure, precise wording,

40、Can reflect the lively scene of the Spring Festival through specific examples.

英语作文评语 40句菁华扩展阅读

英语作文评语 40句菁华（扩展1）

——英语作文谚语 40句菁华

1、人凭志气，虎凭威势。

2、从善如登，从恶如崩。

3、志高品高，志下品下。

4、烈士暮年，壮心不已。

5、王婆卖瓜，自卖自夸。

6、三年清知府，十万雪花银。

7、佛烧一炷香，人争一口气。

8、打人不打脸，吃饭不夺碗。

9、猫鼠不同眠，虎鹿不同行。

10、穷人心肠好，富人心如刀。

11、鸟多不怕鹰，人多把山*。

12、龙无云不行，鱼无水不生。

13、出淤泥而不染，濯清涟而不妖。

14、老牛肉有嚼头，老人言有听头。

15、人必须有自信，这是成功的秘密。

16、偷来钱，两三天；血汗钱，万万年。

17、天上无云不下雨，世间无理事不成。

18、拼尽全力赢高考，苦尽干来齐欢笑。

19、既然选择了远方，便只顾风雨兼程！

20、狐狸总要露尾巴，毒蛇总要吐舌头。

21、自己做错不算数，别人做错打**。

22、Who laughs last laughs best.

23、Time waits for fools who wander.

24、Without health, money is useless.

25、Man by his will, tiger by his power.

26、Force is strong, courage is frightening.

27、Only through hard work can we become good steel.

28、In his old age, the martyrs are full of ambition.

29、Trees attract great wind and suffer great calamity.

30、No cloud in the sky, no rain, no reason in the world.

31、Three years of Qing Zhifu, 100,000 snowflakes and silver.

32、Cats and mice sleep differently, tiger and deer do differently.

33、It is difficult to practise courage without taking three risks.

34、People must have self-confidence, which is the secret of success.

35、Ask the woodcutter for firewood and the official for boat sailing.

36、The fox always shows its tail and the snake always spits its tongue.

37、Nothing is difficult in the world, as long as you are willing to climb.

38、It's hard to cover two ears with one hand and boarding two ships with one foot.

39、Everyone sees the advantage but not the harm. Fish sees the food but not the fishing.

40、Make every effort to win the college entrance examination and work hard to laugh together.

英语作文评语 40句菁华（扩展2）

——英语作文 40句菁华

1、Knowledge makes humble, ignorance makes proud.

2、Learn to walk before you run.

3、Like a rat in a hole.

4、Like tree, like fruit.

5、Failure as a daily occurrence;

6、除了不诚实的人外，任何诚实的人都能得到蜂蜜，人人都这么想。

7、穿天鹅绒的老兵发现温度计的直径为一米。

8、作家在被子里十分*静地写白皮书。

9、人活着总是要得罪一些人的就要看那些人是否值得得罪。

10、生命虽短，爱却绵长。

11、你不会因为美丽去爱一个女人，但她却会因为你的爱而变得美丽。

12、好人越夸越好，坏人越夸越糟。

13、大多数主人对最前面的幽灵人质的敌对态度几乎到了极顶。

14、先生，你的鸟搅了我女友的生日聚会。

15、网中的湿宠物还没有登上喷气飞机。

16、不懂世故，幼稚可笑。

17、命里有时终需有命里无时莫强求。

18、天空没有翅膀的痕迹，而鸟儿已飞过。

19、爱是一盏永不昏暗的明灯。

20、我在宁静的宇宙飞船里踱步。

21、首犯的犯罪基本上与石灰和加班无关。

22、爱情的炽热胜过千万团的火。

23、爱很难投入，但一旦投入，便更难走出。

24、例如，我可以即刻知道该恒定距离。

25、Suggesting that one thing ... is better than another thing ... bears no more significance than insinuating that black is better than white .

26、人类正面临着一个严重的问题…，这个问题变得越来越严重。

27、失败乃成功之母。

28、俗话说(常言道)……，它是我们前辈的经历，但是，即使在今天，它在许多场合仍然适用。

29、任何事物都是有两面性，…也不例外。它既有有利的一面，也有不利的一面。

30、…已成为人的关注的热门话题，特别是在年青人当中，将引发激烈的辩论。

31、Those who violate traffic regulations should be punished.

32、Smoking has a great influence on our health.

33、Business may be troublesome,but idleness is pernicious.

34、Better master one than engage with ten.

35、On no account can we ignore the value of knowledge.

36、Although many people(believe)that…,I doubt whether the(argument)bears further(*ysis).虽然有许多人相信…，但我怀疑这个论点能否经得起进一步的推敲。

37、In my opinion,it is more advisable to do something than to do something.在我看来，做…比做…更明智。

38、As opposed to widely held belief,I believe that…与普遍接受的看法不同，我认为…

39、Some people think that….To be frank,I cannot agree with their opinion for the reasons below.一些人认为…，坦白地讲，我不赞同他们的观点，理由如下：

40、37)There is another reason why I cast my preference for…我倾向于…还有另外一个原因。

英语作文评语 40句菁华（扩展3）

——英语谚语作文 40句菁华

1、人靠自修，树靠人修。

2、吃饭防噎，走路防跌。

3、宁失一事，不失一时。

4、不怕人不敬，就怕己不正。

5、你对人无情，人对你薄意。

6、做事循天理，出言顺人心。

7、好汉凭志强，好马凭胆壮。

8、宁可悔了改，不可做了悔。

9、工欲善其事，必先利其器。

10、打空拳费力，说空话劳神。

11、水落现石头，日久见人心。

12、留得青山在，不怕没柴烧。

13、砍柴砍小头，问路问老头。

14、老姜辣味大，老人经验多。

15、不要等待机会，而要创造机会。

16、冷，冷在风里，穷，穷在租里。

17、有理不在言高，有话说在面前。

18、有话说在明处，有药敷在痛处。

19、没有乡下泥腿，饿死城里油嘴。

20、胆大骑龙骑虎，胆小骑猫骑兔。

21、不怕吃饭拣大碗，就怕干活爱偷懒。

22、宁做穷人脚下土，不做财*上珍。

23、Better repent than repent.

24、Sharp tools make good work.

25、Cold, cold in the wind, poor, poor in rent.

26、Rigid is easy to break, soft is always there.

27、Eat to prevent choking, walk to prevent falling.

28、Harmony breeds wealth, adversity breeds disaster.

29、Interlaces are like mountains, but not separated.

30、You are merciless to others, but they are indifferent to you.

31、People start from their hearts and trees start from their roots.

32、A good man depends on his ambition and a good horse on his courage.

33、Better be the foot of the poor than the treasure chairman Shangzhen.

34、From thrift to luxury is easy, from luxury to frugality is difficult.

35、Niang Tong Niang, the road is long; Niang Tong Niang, the line is long.

36、Grown from sludge but unstained, posing elegantly without being flirtatious.

37、He who always wants to win must lose, and he who is not afraid of losing must win.

38、Water falls into stone, and people's hearts and minds grow with each passing day.

39、The frown is cold to the finger of a thousand men, and the bow is sweet to the cow.

40、You are advised to drink more wine, and there is no reason why the sun rises in the west.

英语作文评语 40句菁华（扩展4）

——英语作文中常用的谚语 40句菁华

1、君子报仇，十年不晚。

2、坐吃山空，立吃地陷。

3、大王好见，小鬼难求。

4、小人自大，小溪声大。

5、小时偷针，大了偷金。

6、得道多助，失道寡助。

7、打一巴掌，给个甜枣。

8、水往下流，人争上游。

9、稳扎稳打无往而不胜。

10、买了便宜柴，烧了夹生饭。

11、家无主心骨，扫帚颠倒竖。

12、火越烧越旺，人越干越壮。

13、行为不正经，舌头短三分。

14、要知山中事，乡间问老农。

15、谎话讲不得，庄稼荒不得。

16、鼓不敲不响，理不辩不明。

17、鸡大飞不过墙，灶灰筑不成墙。

18、只有上不去的天，没有过不去的山。

19、忍一句，息一怒；饶一着，赢一步。

20、良药苦口利于病，忠言逆耳利于行。

21、Sit and eat, eat and sink.

22、Be judgmental and confused.

23、Get more help, get less help.

24、People are afraid of politeness.

25、Give me a sweet date with a slap.

26、Boasting and lying are the same people.

27、He bought cheap firewood and cooked rice.

28、It is not too late for a gentleman to revenge.

29、Happy is contentment, not humiliation for life.

30、Water flows downstream and people compete upstream.

31、Efforts to create hope and strive to achieve dreams.

32、Respect for old age, reverence for grass and treasure.

33、The more the fire burns, the stronger the man becomes.

34、The longer the horns are, the more greedy the rich are.

35、Three days do not read oral, three years do not do manual.

36、Pay is not necessarily successful, give up is bound to fail.

37、Returning tigers to the mountains is bound to have future problems.

38、Chickens can't fly over the walls, but kitchen ashes can't build walls.

39、To know what's going on in the mountains, ask the old peasants in the countryside.

40、Where there is a mountain, there is a road, and where there is water, there is a ferry.

英语作文评语 40句菁华（扩展5）

——英语作文里常用的谚语 40句菁华

1、一人作恶，万人遭殃。

2、书是随时携带的花园。

3、刻薄成家，终无久享。

4、路是弯的，理是直的。

5、锲而不舍，金石可镂。

6、一天吃餐粥，一年省石谷。

7、世上无难事，只要肯登攀。

8、劝人终有益，挑唆害无穷。

9、有多大的脚，穿多大的鞋。

10、有理说实话，没理说蛮话。

11、砖连砖成墙，瓦连瓦成房。

12、说话看势头，办事看风头。

13、努力就能成功，坚持确保胜利。

14、口说不如身到，耳闻不如目睹。

15、出笼的鸟儿难回，出口的话儿难收。

16、How big feet, how big shoes to wear.

17、Dogs go fart, people go at the trend.

18、Three smelly cobblers are Zhuge Liang.

19、A cat that crows much catches fewer rats.

20、People love the rich, but dogs bite the poor.

21、Chop wood to see the texture, speak with reason.

22、Satisfaction brings peace, greed brings disaster.

23、Trees attract great wind and suffer great calamity.

24、There are many roots in trees, but many people know.

25、Cut firewood up the hill and catch birds up the tree.

26、Three hundred and sixty rows, row out the first prize.

27、I am confident, I work hard, I am excellent, I succeed.

28、Success is not enough, but failure is more than enough.

29、No doubt about the employer, no doubt about the suspect.

30、If you start a family harshly, you will enjoy it forever.

31、What you say makes you laugh, but what you don't say makes you jump.

32、Civilian officers have three hands and military officers have four legs.

33、If you sail against the current, if you don't advance, you will retreat.

34、There's reason to tell the truth, but there's no reason to tell the truth.

35、Tigers are not afraid of mountain heights, but fish are not afraid of water depths.

36、People are afraid of losing their ambition and trees are afraid of losing their bark.

37、A drop of sweat, ten thousand grains of grain, long flow of water through the disaster.

38、Birds out of cages are hard to come back, and words out of cages are hard to come back.

39、People's heart is not enough to swallow elephants, greed is not enough to eat the moon.

40、It's hard for a man to follow a hundred wishes, but it's hard for a wall to keep out all kinds of wind.

英语作文评语 40句菁华（扩展6）

——英语高考作文谚语 40句菁华

1、寡言者智。

2、知音难觅。

3、良药苦口。

4、逆境出人才。

5、不可半途而废。

6、一寸光阴一寸金。

7、勤奋是成功之母。

8、有志者，事竟成。

9、凡事总是由难而易。

10、抄近路反而绕远路。

11、说得容易，做得难。

12、水滴石穿，绳锯木断。

13、要人尊敬，必须自重。

14、人的主要目的并不是赚钱。

15、努力造就实力，态度决定高度。

16、知识只能循序渐进，不能跃进。

17、要记牢，一个今天值两个明天。

18、如果要挖井，就要挖到水出为止。

19、知识之于心灵正如健康之于身体。

20、不是你比别人差，只是付出不够多。

21、欲望以提升热忱，毅力以磨*高山。

22、Unity is strength.

23、Still water runs deep.

24、Who makes what friends?

25、Good deeds build virtue.

26、Adversity leads to talent.

27、A man of few words is wise.

28、Health is better than wealth.

29、Diligence is the mother of success.

30、True knowledge comes from practice.

31、God helps those who help themselves.

32、The good times are not always there.

33、Where there is a will, there is a way.

34、Small holes do not fill, big holes bear hardship.

35、Drops of water and stones pierce and ropes saw wood.

36、Knowledge is to the mind what health is to the body.

37、The weak choose ease, the strong go forward bravely.

38、Young men do not work hard, but old men do not work hard.

39、Misers accumulate wealth, which is of no benefit to themselves.

40、If you want to dig a well, you have to dig until the water comes out.

英语作文评语 40句菁华（扩展7）

——读书作文评语 40句菁华

1、感情真实细腻，言语感人至深，确是发自作者内心的肺腑之言。

2、例证丰富，选材得当，描述详略得当，较具说服力。

3、感情浓烈，如火山喷发，汩汩而出，能深深打动读者。

4、语句通顺，句意流畅，言辞优美，叙写形象生动鲜明，语言表达能力较强。

5、语言活泼，风趣幽默，令人忍俊不禁。

6、语言过于简略，似为纲要式叙写，但又未能提纲挈领，文意残缺不全，叙写枯燥，干瘪呆板，毫无生气。

7、语言过于简略，似为纲要式叙写，但又未能提纲挈领，文意残缺不全，叙写枯燥，干瘪呆板，毫无生气。作文开头：

8、文章语言生动丰富，可读性强。开头出手不凡，吸引读者开头打动人心，具有真情实感。

9、叙述自然生动结构紧凑，衔接自然连贯，中心突出。

10、通过丰富人物的语言和动作，衬托出人物的思想品质。

11、文章线索明朗，主题突出，紧紧围绕…进行文章开头与结尾时的诗化语言，充满想象与韵律之美，令人愿读，爱读，不忍释手

12、文章融情于景，边绘景边抒情，善于运用打比方的手法，使文章生动具体

13、描写细腻，生活气息浓厚，遣词造句准确传神。

14、语言准确，鲜明生动，内容极其丰富具体，

15、文章边叙事边抒情。

16、事件虽小，但反映出较深刻的道理，具有一定的普遍性。

17、反问句开头吸引读者

18、充分运用语言动作心理描写使事情具体生动

19、简要叙述前因进行铺垫

20、除了上课就是下课，学校生活似乎*淡乏味，但本文却善于从*凡中发现不*凡，而且表现得津津有味：紧张的早晨，战斗的中午，疲劳的晚上，每个时段都选取了极富生活情趣的镜头加以点染。清新活泼的语言，生动地展示了当代中学生积极向上的精神风貌。

21、文章凭着丰富的想象，凭着多彩的语言，将…呈现读者面前

22、文章简洁明了，语言*淡朴实

23、虽为一件事，但作者却描述得有声有色，结尾处不可或缺的点晴之笔，较好地突现文章主题。

24、文章真实感强，立体感强，可读性强，趣味性强以敏锐的社会洞察力，以童话反映现实阴暗面，并以生动的语言，描绘出一幅幅贪婪众生相，称得上入木三分

25、语言简练规范开篇吸引人

26、全文语言生动准确，情节精彩曲折，仿佛将读者带进了开心乐园，令人眉开眼笑。

27、可以说你的文章充满了真情实感。人嘛，失败在所难免，有勇气能面对失败就更加难能可贵。我相信是金子，总会有闪光之时。希望你尽快调整心态，你将会发现天空更加湛蓝。

28、…以…开头，较有新意。前因后果娓娓道来。

29、开头直奔主题，也是一种写法。

30、开头很活泼。拟人化手法的运用使开头显得活泼，

31、反问句开头，吸引读者。

32、情节变化*淡无奇，缺乏新意。

33、情节*直，毫无悬念，*铺直叙似记流水账。

34、构思不合常理，内容漏洞百出，不能反映生活的真实。

35、比喻生动形象贴切，本体与喻体形神相似，文章的趣味性与说服力都大大增强了。

36、你很善于抓住事物的特点进行具体描绘，展示了，文笔间渗透了情感。文章很有说服力，也发人深思。从写作上来说，情节生动，文章有波澜，读起来深受教益。

37、本文语言虽然并不华丽，但却极为准确生动，情感丰富而真实，读来津津有味。大量采用生活中的口语，使文章更显自然亲氏。结尾以点明中尽，含蓄隽永，意味深长。

38、虽然你能身心愉悦地生活在自己的天地里，但社会的发展已经全球化，所以你应该以崭新的姿态投入到集体生活之中，适应社会的发展。

39、文章有理有据，说服力强，突出人物个性，上下文过渡自然，条理清晰，首尾照应，结尾点题，突出中心思想。

40、语言诙谐有趣，情节安排曲折生动，开头与结尾的呼应巧妙。本文篇幅虽短，但内容生动具体，段落明确，语言朴实，通俗易懂。

英语作文评语 40句菁华（扩展8）

——高中作文评语 40句菁华

1、全文可圈可点的佳句不少，给文章增添了些文学情趣。

2、文章内容新颖，结构合理，流畅连贯，自然通达。

3、本文语言虽然并不华丽，但却极为准确生动，情感丰富而真实，读来津津有味。

4、特写镜头别开生面，情趣盎然。全文充满童心童趣，读来倍感亲切。

5、全文语言流畅，行文舒展自如，自然洒脱，称得上是一篇较成功的之作。

6、事例叙述生动、具体、趣味性强，且与前面的比喻…一脉相承。最后，作者用寥寥数语，表现出了自已对…的情感，令人感动。

7、文章杂而不乱，能做到详略得当，重点突出。(.)

8、文中描绘的…清新活泼，欢快明朗字里行间跳动着的童心，使文章也有了生命力

9、文章凭着丰富的想象，凭着多彩的语言，将…呈现读者面前

10、文章简洁明了，语言*淡朴实

11、开头简明扼要

12、开头出手不凡吸引读者

13、开头打动人心具有真情实感。

14、比喻贴切用词生动。

15、文章语言通俗易懂贴近生活实际读来令人倍感亲切。

16、以轻松愉快的语气向我们娓娓道来令人回味无穷。

17、通过丰富人物的语言和动作衬托出人物的思想品质。

18、文章清逸婉丽、流畅连贯尤其人物语言风趣风趣

19、文章想象合情合理

20、文章线索明朗主题突出紧紧围绕…进行。

21、文章开头与结尾时的诗化语言充满想象与韵律之美令人愿读、爱读不忍释收辏

22、这篇文章作者以一组排比开篇，将“理想”比作“指路明灯”，形象生动地写出了理想对人生的重要性。文中作者通过写自己想要成为一名老师的理想，表现了自己明确的人生目标以及为实现理想不懈努力的决心。

23、作者形散神聚地驾驭能力很强，整篇文章一气呵成，行文如流水一般，给人明快舒畅的感觉！

24、事例叙述生动、具体、趣味性强，且与前面的比喻…一脉相承。最后，作者用寥寥数语，表现出了自已对…的.情感，令人感动。

25、本文主要优点有三：本文能紧扣题目要求，完整地写了…的过程，结构严谨，重点突出，语言朴实，简洁，流畅，开头和结尾都很自然，准确。

26、主题凝炼，集中，议论深刻，有力，震撼人心

27、本文用词准确，严密，语言*实自然，而比喻，拟人等修辞的运用更使文章锦上添花

28、全文叙事集中，不枝不蔓，语言朴实流畅，感情真挚感人

29、语言朴素，中心明确，构思合理，行文层次清楚

30、文章头尾照应，中心明确，结构完整

31、细节描写颇具匠心。极富功底。

32、重点突出，详略得当，内容具体。

33、比喻贴切，用词生动。

34、…以轻松愉快的语气，向我们娓娓道来，令人回味无穷。

35、叙述自然生动、结构紧凑，衔接自然连贯，中心突出。

36、叙沭自然生动结构紧凑衔接自然连贯中心突出。

37、你的文章象一条缓缓而流的小溪，清秀，流畅。文笔优美，感情真挚细腻，具有个人风格。愿你在写作路上继续采撷生活中的朵朵浪花，让自己的风格更趋完善!

38、行文笔锋犀利，旁征博引，根底深厚。虽然在社会问题的分析上还有些绝对化，但文章依然以一种热辣和率直令人感动不已。再下功夫加强对史书和社会评论进行研读、思考，相信你的文章会日趋成熟，更加耐读!

39、本文文笔优美清新，富有一定的哲理性。文中写“我”在大海边散步，大海不仅给予“我”美的享受，还引起“我”的沉思和联想，可以说是大海给了我畅游的空间，“我”为大海注如入了生命，使大海成为一个具有高尚人格力量的“人”。本文读后给人以美感，引人深思。

40、读你的文章真是一种享受。首先是思想感情的愉悦，当然来自你文章深邃新鲜的立意。所谓“登山则情满于山，观海则意溢于海”，你是个生活的有心人，你用真情打动了别人，这是你作文的最大成功。

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